Thread:IZeroI/@comment-5165182-20120902020254/@comment-5165182-20120917145816

Wow! That's some work you did there. Nice job!

And some comments:

Maybe you could be less specific (the not-so important parts and make it like a not-so-long summary.). The thing is, it's taking up too many space.

And spacing per paragraph. Too much crammed information haha.

That's all :D